All 20 monster chapters of the Monster Overhaul are complete!
Iguanamouth |
In their revised order:
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 |
People | Dungeon | Dragon | Thinking Beasts | Heraldic Beasts |
Lucas Roussel | Robin Carpenter |
Iguanamouth | Lucas Roussel | Iguanamouth |
Adventurer | Giant Spider | Ancient Dragon | Harpy | Basilisk |
Barbarian | Goblin | Dracospawn | Kappa | Catoblepas |
Cultist | Lich | Drake | Lamia | Chimera |
Knight | Mimic | Droggin | Lammasu | Cockatrice |
Mercenary | Monstrous Vermin | Ethereal Dragon | Manticore | Griffon |
Peasant | Mummy | Kobold | Medusa | Hydra |
Pilgrim | Myconid | Pseudodragon | Minotaur | Owlbear |
Merchant | Ooze | Wyvern | Naga | Questing Beast |
Townsfolk | Orc | Young Dragon | Peryton | Strong Toad |
Wizard | Skeleton | Zombie Dragon | Sphinx | Wurm |
6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10 |
Primeval | Elemental | Divine | Dark and Malign | A Wizard Did It |
Logan | Ashlyn Rudolph | Robin Carpenter |
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Flying Lizard | Elemental | Angel | Ghost | Aboleth |
Herd Lizard | Elemental Spirit | Beast of Creation | Ghoul | Animated Item |
Swift Lizard | Elemental Tyrant | Cherub | Necromancer | Elsewhere Creature |
Thunder Lizard | Firebat | Demigod | Night Hag | Eye Tyrant |
Tyrant Lizard | Gargoyle | Devil | Nightmare Beast | Golem |
Cave People | Grue | Dybuk | Ogre | Homunculus |
Collossal Ape | Living Gem | Hell Hound | Vampire | Mind Eater |
Ground Sloth | Sandwalker | Imp | Werewolf | Mutant |
Predatory Plant | Spitling | Scapegoat | Wight | Rust Monster |
Troglodyte | Will-o-the-Wisp | Visionary | Zombie | Shivered Beast |
11 | 12 | 13 | 14 | 15 |
Spring | Summer | Fall | Winter | Hostile Forests |
Ashlyn Rudolph | Naf | Luka Rejec |
Nadhir | |
Centaur | Chaos Frog | Dark Fair | Biscuit Golem | Bear |
Druid | Firebird | Dullahan | Blizzard Eel | Boar |
Flower Nymph | Froghemoth | Harvest Avatar | Grey Horse | Dryad |
Hatchling | Mandrake | Iron Fulmination | Ice Hag | Fairy |
Hateful Goose | Pyromancer | Leafling | Kamaitachi | Giant Snake |
Raincloud | Raijū | Murderous Crows | Nuckelavee | Tiger |
Saty | Skeeter | Polevik | Remorhaz | Treeant |
Shambler | Sun Dog | Scarecrow | Snow Fungus | Troll |
Sigbin | Thriae | Shofar Ram | Snow Golem | Unicorn |
Wicker Walker | Tunnel Hulk | Tempest Hag | Tortoise Tsar | Wolf |
16 | 17 | 18 | 19 | 20 |
Hot Plains | Mysterious Mountains | Stormy Seas | Strange Water | Sci-Fi |
Logan | Naf | Frenden | ||
Baboon | Alicanto | Giant Crab | Abyssal Fish | Alien Invader |
Crocodile | Alpine Specter | Kraken | Ancient Arthropod | Alien Visitor |
Elephant | Ape | Merfolk | Leech of Paradise | Alpha Brain |
Flightless Bird | Couatl | Pirate | Mantis Shrimp | Doppelganger |
Hive Insect | Giant | Remora | Marine Worm | Giant Insect |
Hippopotamus | Noble Giant | Sea Hag | Predatory Snail | Perfect Predator |
Hyena | Kirin | Sea Serpent | Rotifer | Robot Hound |
Jinnī |
Panther | Seal | Sea Slug | Robot Servant |
Lion | Roperite | Shark | Sea Star | Robot Titan |
Rhinoceros | Telluric Goat | Whale | Tardigrade | Veggie-Mite |
With additional art by Dyson Logos and Scott Wegener.
All completed chapters are available on Patreon. 300 A4 pages of content (so far!). I sometimes post WIP tables and tools on twitter, mostly to instantly locate spelling errors. It's funny how hitting the "publish" button does that.
Robin Carpenter |
The plan from the last update post hasn't changed.
- Do an editing pass, focusing on numerical consistency. Some of the values (particularly treasure values) are placeholders.
- Sort out the Phylogenetic Tree (the HD(NA) bit), the tactics section, and the alternative sorting methods.
- More editing and testing.
- Even more editing and testing.
- [???]
- Crowdfunding?
Tabulation
Back in 2014, SBLaxman created an extremely useful spreadsheet listing all monsters (including really obscure ones) for AD&D (1E and 2E), 0E, and Basic. It's got everything a collator might need. (Note: the AD&D tab starts with 2E selected and 1E hidden by default. Check the "edition" column).
The problem is that D&D writers never really had a consistent idea of what a HD meant, or how to format statblocks. Sure, the basic framework stayed the same, but some authors list HD as a range (3-10), some as a flat number (4), some as a number plus a fixed value (5+2), some as a number minus a fixed value (1-1), some as a fraction (1/2), some as a dice substitution (4 HD, but using d6s instead of d8s), and some as a HP value only (128 HP).
Yes, there are reasons for all these variations. It doesn't necessarily mean they're good reasons. At low HD, a flat fixed value addition or subtraction is a significant change, but at higher HD it stops meaning much. Is 8+3 HD really different from 8 HD? This issue extends to virtually every aspect of the statblock.
For the Monster Overhaul, I've mostly stuck to a a single listed HD value followed by an average HP value (HDx4. Yes, 4.5 is more accurate, but that requires extra math and, in testing, it's rarely if ever relevant). Creatures with 0 or 1 HD may have non-average HP values listed instead.
The chaotic nature of AD&D stat writing makes any sort of trend analysis difficult. Noisy garbage in, noisy garbage out.
Still, it's an extremely handy list. If I can't assign a matching Monster Overhaul monster to something on the list, I'll need to consider if a) I need to revise a chapter or b) if that monster is worth including. Some monsters are too specific or too boring to include. I did one pass while writing the chapters; this second pass will help write the indices.
I'll also be indexing results against relevant creatures that have never received D&D stats. A Book of Creatures will be helpful.
Revised HD(NA) Section
Page 1 of 6 of the Monster Overhaul HD(NA) chart. |
In a book of monsters, indexing is critical. Listing monsters by HD is one practical method, but what if, instead of a simple list, we used a phylogenetic tree? You can read about the original HD(NA) concept in this post, as well as looking at the sprawling chart for the AD&D MM, MMII, and Fiend Folio.
The HD(NA) chart for the Monster Overhaul is more compact. Part of the pruning process is eliminating low HD entries that aren't interesting (Squirrel - Ordinary, etc.) and condensing other entries into general types (Mammoth, Mastodon, etc. -> Elephant). Still, it's an... interesting chart. Did you know that Druids go through a Baboon stage? It's true!
The pages are designed to bleed into the gutter of the book, so it might look a bit odd on your screens.
Duplicate entries in the same column are creatures with variable or tiered HD.
Final Notes
Thanks to everyone who suggested monsters to round out each chapter, found issues with draft content, or provided other kinds of useful feedback.
If you spot any creatures that should be listed and aren't, let me know in the comments. Chances are it's covered by one entry or another, but it can't hurt to check.
It's late to post now since you have done all the work and written everything but yet.
ReplyDeleteOther possible monsters:
Strange waters
I found a gian mantis shrimp pic https://imgur.com/aWQZe5c
Variation of the Sea Star: Sea Black Hole and Sea Super Nova. Sea black hole is a giant sea urchin
It mmoves on its spikes and is unable to touch things without stabbing them. Human sized. A cursed human.
Whatever the hell this is https://imgur.com/sqgiabh IIRC I ook it from one of the paizo pirate books. A siren singing hydra or something.
Stormy Seas
kelpie a water horse. https://imgur.com/uHzKDg8
Lusca: a shark octopus hybrid. I like the version where the tentacles end up in more sharks https://imgur.com/6FL93e9
Giant Sea serpent. https://imgur.com/bMELciF Or undead giant sea serpent.
It's not too late! As long as the book isn't published, it's all just easily reordered 1s and 0s.
Delete-Giant mantis shrimp is in there. I'm a bit inconsistent about when I use "Giant" prefixes. I figure everything in the Strange Water chapter is so strange already I don't need to specifically point out that it's oversized.
-I like those! I've already got the sun-theme with the Sun Dogs, but maybe I'll add a cross-reference.
-I have no idea what that Pazio thing is either but it's excellent.
-Kelpie has a few options for cross-references.
-Lusca is definitely a Kraken of some sort.
-Sea Serpent covers big creatures, but for an island/world serpent, a Beast of Creation should work.
Thank you for the suggestions though! All very helpful, especially for index-building.
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ReplyDeleteHey, how do I get on the mailing list for the kickstarter(or whatever)? I'm very hyped about this and would love to get it as asap after it's published.
ReplyDeleteI'll announce it here, on twitter, on Patreon, etc, so any one of those methods should work.
DeleteI'm late to the party, sorry.
ReplyDeleteI tried to find if anything was missing, and I think you've done an amazing work with category (ontological?)
So just checking :
Jellyfish/Coelenterates(name from alternity GMC guide)/Radially symmetrical creatures would be in a "Not another phylum arthropods generator"?
Squid would be similar to a small kraken?
Kelpie/sea horse/hippocampus would be functionally similar to seals?